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Ben
Hamilton
Winner
of our Top 5 Poets of
September 2005 Online
Competition
I was
born and bred in Stone-in-Oxney
in 1958 (A man of Kent),
although temporarily
exiled to Hastings.
I have
toyed with poetry on and
off since leaving school
but have regarded myself
as neither readable nor
prolific.
In
recent years I was conned
into writing a poem for a
friends wedding, with the
promise that all the
guests would be writing
and reading their own
works. Needless to say I
was the only contributor.
I have since sought my
revenge by writing about
any event significant to
their family. My favourite
of these poems stems from
a gin induced conversation
in which my friends were
contemplating how they
would raise their second
child, Phoebe. Their
children and pets are
often the catalyst for
some of the short poems
(Poems that small children
can remember).
I
wrote the winning poem for
September (The Pal's
Anniversary) to accompany
a short ghost story. The
story centres on the ghost
of a small child, who died
at the beginning of WW1
and relates to a brigade
slaughtered on their first
day of battle. The story
had been written in
conjunction with Oxney
author, John Howlett, as
the basis for a treasure
hunt to raise money for
the village memorial hall.
More
recent works (and works in
progress) are being
inspired by Karen, without
whom I would not have
rediscovered emotions,
that I thought had been
made redundant twenty
years ago. With my new
incentive I may yet become
prolific or even readable.
THE
PAL'S ANNIVERSARY
The
"Pals", on the
marsh the night before
had promised to come back
To
reminisce and drink the
health
of their colleagues,
dressed in black.
The
brigade had numbered forty
souls
a community at arms.
They
had left their wives and
loved ones
their families, their
farms.
Right
from the start the
soldiers knew
the battle plan was flawed
as well-fed brass, in
ivory towers
moved pictures 'round the
board
Knowing
best, the top brass said
"Moral victory's at
hand".
Then
without debate they sealed
their fate
and issued the command.
The
men, calf-deep in
blood-tinged mud
crouched 'till the whistle
blew.
Bittersweet
tones through the battle
din
spurred on the gallant
crew.
It
took twenty-three minutes
for the unseen guns
to slay the village
brigade.
The
"Five-nines"
left hollow memorials
for the bodies, where they
lay.
From
time to time in Appledore
and towards the Saxon
Shore
the brigade "it's
said" can be heard
again
heading off to war
Some
have seen them and some
have heard
the message that they give
"Our deaths have
bought the freedom
that allows good men to
live".
Do not
mourn our passing
but remember and be glad
and think of what you can
achieve
not what you may have had.
PARENTAL
GUIDANCE
Isn't it strange how
miss Phoebe Goldsmith
or "Phoebe
Grace", as she's
called to her face,
has the same initials as
Parental Guidance,
which although best
intentioned, may be a
little misplaced.
For Mummy and Daddy
have already made plans
that set out the young
lady's life
and the way things are
going you can be fairly
certain
she'll never be somebody's
wife.
For she won't have a
boyfriend
'til she's passed thirty
seven,
she wont be dressed in
"Frilly Frocks",
the belt that they give
her, upon her twelfth
birthday
will have high security
locks.
There'll be high
tensile bars at her
bedroom window
and several armed guards
at her door,
she'll be fitted with
"Trackers" and
other devices,
young Phoebe could not be
loved more.
LOVES
PROGRESSION
One-second
turns into a minute
a minute to an hour.
A seed that's left upon
the ground
may turn into a flower.
An hour turns into a day
a day into a week.
A small hill at the start
of time
may become the highest
peak.
A week will soon become a
month
and the thought behind
this rhyme
is the short time that we
have both enjoyed
could turn into a
lifetime.
THERMOS
Thermos
flasks are clever things,
At least that's what I'm
told
They know to keep the hot
things hot
And keep the cold things
cold.
VOICE
OF AN ANGEL
I'd
have taken your
frustration,
your incapacity,
in exchange for a brief
period
of sweet lucidity
to express my love, and
hear you say
the things that we both
know.
I felt
the time was coming
that I had to let you go
There
were times, before you
died
when the dialogue was
strained.
My
soul, like your frail body
felt traumatized and
drained.
But
when a glimmer did appear
it painted better things,
a portrait of a better
time
when you would laugh and
sing.
Oh
mother, how you could
sing.
And
I'm sure that you will
sing again,
not for the ears of us
but for the friends and
family
and ancestors long passed.
I
shall hear you sing again,
just as you always would,
with the clarity of angels
that makes the heart feel
good.
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